I'm curious - how many of you deliberately observe people around you so that you can use them (or aspects of them) in your writing? Whenever you come across someone interesting on the train or in the queue at the store, do you surreptitiously pull out a notebook and start jotting down things about them, or do you file them away mentally for future reference?
I do this all the time. I have a little black notebook that I always have within arm's reach, and it's filled with scribbled scraps of dialogue, ideas for short stories, snippets of overheard conversation and lightning descriptions of quirky, interesting or downright odd people that I encounter on my daily commute.
Like the guy who sat in front of me on the train the other day who looked perfectly well-groomed and neatly turned out with a snappy suit and freshly scrubbed, pink face that was nearly hairless, but who nevertheless reeked so viciously that he singed my nostril hairs. It was an actively aggressive, sour stench - as if he'd bathed in every evil, nasty sin he'd ever committed and trailed them around with him like a cloying miasma of pain and guilt.
Or the sweet little old lady who sat across from me (again on the train), soaked and bedraggled from the rain. She stared hard at the sudoku puzzle in the newspaper on her lap, frowning at it, then she shakes her head almost imperceptibly and says "fuck" under her breath.
Or the red-headed guy with the vacant smile who works at my local grocery store and who must have been pushing carts around for at least the past fifteen years - I'm sure there's a story there.
My point is stories are all around us and that people - even ordinary-seeming people, are often deeper and more surprising than you'd believe. Be they villains, protagonists or extras, they can all have a part to play in your developing story.
13 years ago
